As a part of this project, we had an opportunity to revise and correct our website before finals. Here is a list of all revisions:
- Added image sources to Gallery page
- Fixed Bibliography page
- Formatted Hill, James. “A Brief History of Music Formats.”
- Corrected Nathan, John. “Sony: The Private Life.”
- Added link to Kimizuka, Masanori. “Historical Development of Magnetic Recording and Tape Recorder.”
- Added link to Engel, Friedrich, and Peter Hammar. “A Selected History of Magnetic Recording.”
- Rephrased section in Poulsen’s Telegraphone
- Fixed Magnetophon
- Corrected spelling of author name
- Added link to Engel, Friedrich, and Peter Hammar. “A Selected History of Magnetic Recording.”
- Fixed RCA Sound Tape Cartridge
- Added link to advertisement
- Added link to Kimizuka, Masanori. “Historical Development of Magnetic Recording and Tape Recorder.”
- Fixed spelling error in Compact Discs
- Fixed spelling error in Success of the Cassette: The Walkman
- Fixed The Inventor: Lou Ottens page
- Footnote citation errors
- Paraphrasing and quotation errors
- Grammatical errors


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